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Absorbing, ever - watching
born feet first upon the ground,
his lungs are low on air
and a scream is all he sounds.
He left the life of learning
to a world of smoke and roses,
when a beam of light can tip both ways
unscathed is he, the boy who chose.

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But still those claws dig in
in the edges of his mind,
there’s only one can see
and that's another of his kind.
He hasn’t seen a mirror,
he doesn’t know his name,
its through imagination
that he keeps himself insane.
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Wonderful and eye-opening :clap: instant fave!!

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I'm*Dean*NOT*Dean*obsessing!!*Dean* :ohnoes:
:drool: [link] :drool: If you aren't a Supernatural fan... click that. You will be.
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I hate you an your amazingness, dear. :3 You know, in that hate-you-love-you way. mhm.

It's just wonderful. There's nothing more to say.
Born feet first upon the ground. That's just "OH MY GOODNESS. I'M THE LINE THAT'S GOING TO MAKE YOU LOVE THIS POEM" all over. :3 hehe

Thank you, Christopher. :)
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Wow. Seriously. It's rare that every line and word and rhythm works but this really does.
Seriously well done.
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Oh, and I particularly love the last line.
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:D insanity is good for the soul.


and milk cartons

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K.
walk through a corner and around an archway. and you might find yourself in a place you've always been looking for.
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Ever heard of Quantum love? one can never prove it, but you know its there
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soul"S" remember i own nishads


and don't keep it in a milk carton.
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no... milk cartons are agents of the board of studies.
death be to them!

Have a lingerie pie

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K.
walk through a corner and around an archway. and you might find yourself in a place you've always been looking for.
--
Ever heard of Quantum love? one can never prove it, but you know its there
:icongracie-is-evil:
oh thats not nothing. lingerie pie is not nothing. its a life dream for some. ..

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